the happenings of surprise

My only desire
is to see
a stream of existence
fall through azure
at contact point
the intact reserves
of the world
like the bubbles
at the end
of your pee.



Modern Poetry

6 thoughts on “the happenings of surprise

  1. Strange night, I was out drinking and going to pee all the time as is natural in those situations. I would hypnotically stare at all the beautiful bubbles I would create, they came up magically. I wanted to dedicate a special poem to them without sounding too banal.

  2. I loved your words and the way you chose a cycle of awareness
    from existence to the water in us
    I am writing my second novel these days in tel aviv and I find inspiration at this website
    beautiful photos near lovely words
    thank you

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